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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Jan 26, 2009 3:53:09 GMT 10
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Post by littlegirl on Jan 26, 2009 5:03:16 GMT 10
Loved their little game. ;D Hope you update soon.
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Post by daniella on Jan 31, 2009 1:08:51 GMT 10
Thanks girls... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Present time: Chapter 5: Suspended ? Dr. Brown house: Dr. Emmet Brown, having come back on time, with the DeLorean reconstituted, after being destroyed by a train, thought about what to do...walking back and forth, he pondered the options he had…. Einstein, his dog and loyal friend on trips, observed him from his bed… ‘ If I just appear to them and tell everything, they’ll think I’m crazy and will intern me... ‘ he thought. ‘ I can’t simply appear to them and convince them to help me... I will have to talk with both of them, together... ah, I know… He didn’t want to do this, but knew it was necessary... ‘ Come, Einstein... ‘ he said. ‘ We don’t have much time… ‘ The dog got up and followed him…. X ~ X ~ X County General Hospital, Chicago 08:57 PM Abby was furious with Luka... they discussed again, now about a diagnostic... they still were, when they walked into the reception… ‘... she doesn’t have appendicitis... ‘ Luka said. Abby turned. ‘ And how do you know it? ’ she said. ‘ She was sensible on the right side of her belly, had pain and fever… ‘ ‘ Yeah I know, but this may indicate another inflammation, not only appendicitis... ‘ Luka said. ’ The patient had pain on the other side of the belly too... can be diverticulites... ‘ Abby denied... they would have to wait the surgeon... ‘ I don’t know why I even try… ‘ said Luka. ‘ Well, I don’t know why I Loose MY time with you... ‘ said Abby. ‘ We are here discussing when the patient is there wi... ‘ ‘ Discussing it because YOU want... ‘ said Luka. Susan, the ER chief was tired of this… she was in the reception and sighed, exasperated… they were always fighting… it was enough… ‘ Stop you two... ‘ she said, walking towards them. ‘ You look like children... ‘ Luka and Abby looked at her and stopped. ‘ I’m tired of having you two fighting all the time...’ Susan said. ‘ You’re off the case, both... and you’re both suspended... for a week, without pay… I want you to think about what’s happening here and what you can do to get the situation better… Abby looked at her friend. She couldn’t believe that Susan was doing this… ‘ Susan... ‘ she tried. ‘ You aren’t being fair, Susan... ‘said Luka. ‘ No Susan, Abby... ‘ Susan said. ‘ I’m not being fair ? This is too much, but I have a baby at home that isn’t sleeping with cramps, I’m tired because of my shifts and have headaches... I had enough of you guys fighting all the time because of small things… ‘ But this isn’t a small thing… ‘ protested Luka. ‘ If the patient has diverticulitis, she won’t need surgery… ‘ ‘ But if she has apendicitis, she will need surgery... ‘ said Abby. ‘ If it blows, she can have a sepsis... ‘ Susan raised a hand and they stopped... ‘ I said that both of you are off the case and suspended, didn’t I ? ‘she asked. ‘ Give me her chart and go home and take a week off…. ‘ Abby sighed and took off her stethoscope from her neck. Luka sighed too and give her the patient’s chart. Without saying anything, they walked together into the lounge... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Post by suzanne on Jan 31, 2009 3:02:59 GMT 10
Nice update!! Both suspended, wonder what they'll do with their time of!! Update soon!!
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Post by daniella on Feb 7, 2009 10:11:43 GMT 10
It's going to be different... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 6: First enconter with Dr. Brown Abby and Luka waited till they were outside, to continue their spat, at each other... ‘ Thanks, Luka...’ she said. She couldn’t believe that she was suspended… ‘Hey, I didn’t even started it...’ he said. ‘ You came to me asking for help... ‘ ‘ Yes, to confirm the patient’s diagnostic, not for telling I’m stupid in front of her... ‘ said Abby, stopping in front of him.. ‘I didn’t called you stupid... ‘ he said. ‘ Besides, the diagnostic was inconclusive in her case...’ ‘How it was inconclusive? ‘asked Abby. Neither were paying attention on a man, approaching them, followed by his dog… ‘How it was inconclusive? ‘asked Abby again. ‘We could have seen it making exclusions... ‘ sair Luka. ‘ If it wasn’t one, was the other one… ‘ Abby denied... this was a waste of time… With this, she turned and started to go towards the El, but Luka stopped and turned her with his hands... Dr. Brown saw his oportunity... ‘Please, help me, quickly...’ the doctor told them, coming running Abby and Luka turned to him. He was very odd guy… ‘What happened? ‘ asked Luka. ‘My wife fainted in the car…' the scientist said, hoping that the clone in his car didn’t fell apart just yet. Luka and Abby looked at each other and followed the man... ‘Why didn’t you go to the hospital?’ asked Abby. ‘ We aren’t from here, so we didn’t know how to go to the hospital... as I figured it out, it was too late and she fainted…’ he explained. ‘I thought we were lost… ‘ When they arrived at the car, in an alley with poor lights, the car door was open... there was a woman sitting there, who looked at them… ‘Emmet... ‘ she said, closing her eyes. Luka knelt in front of her. ‘Ma’am?’ he called, putting his hand on her arm and checking her pluse.... there was none... ‘Abby, we have to take her in...’ Dr. Brown knew he couldn’t loose any more time... taking off his pocket a littler sleep inductor, he approached Abby, first... ‘Sir, do you think you coul…’ she started to ask, but as cut off by the small object and a small light. Luka just heard the sound of someone or something falling into the ground and when he turned, saw Abby fainted... he looked at the man, just seeing a small object and a small light… ‘Right on time… ‘ said the scientist as the clone of his wife began to deteriorate. ‘Now, I just need to put them into the car… ‘ XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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Post by suzanne on Feb 7, 2009 10:40:18 GMT 10
Very interesting!! Left me wondering whats going to happen next!! Update soon Dani!!
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Post by shelby on Feb 8, 2009 0:58:14 GMT 10
AHHH!! You can't leave us like that! What happens next??? Update soon!
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Post by daniella on Feb 13, 2009 3:47:43 GMT 10
Sorry...
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Chapter 7: Telling the story 1
The first thing that Abby felt was that her head was hurting and spinning…. After that, she felt that her body was tied to a chair, im s sitting position, with her hands and feet tied too…
She sighed, trying to make her ideas clear, before opening her eyes, slowly.... she blinked a few times, trying to focus and opened them…
Looking to her sides, she saw Luka beside her, in a position similar to hers….
‘Luka?’ she called, but didn’t get any answer.
Sighing again, Abby looked around... it appeared that they were in a deposit, full of thing...
Turning to him again, she tried...
‘Luka?’
This time, he tried to open his eyes, so she kept trying…
‘Luka?’
He opened his eyes and tried to focus…
‘What...’ he tried.. Turning to his left, he saw her. ‘Abby?’
‘I guess we were kidnapped, Luka...’ she said. ‘My hands are dormant...’
Luka looked at her for a few seconds, before his mind remembered him of what happened...
After he looked around...
‘Hey...’ he screamed.
‘Be quiet...’she said in a little voice.
She didn’t know what was going on, but didn’t want to find out…
Seconds later, they heard someone approaching…
Abby glared at Luka.
‘Great, you’re awake...said a man’s voice…
Both looked at the man, who wasn’t alone,... there was a dog with him…
‘I’m sorry if I had to kidnap you, but it was necessary… ‘ said the man. ‘My name is Emmet Brown... Dr. Emmet Brown or simply Doc… ‘
‘What do you want with us?’ asked Luka.
‘ I need you to listen very carefully… I know that I will sound crazy, but you need to trust me...’said Dr. Brown.’ I was a scientist for thirty years and had worked in big universities, until I retired... I made some projects too, but only after my retirement, I could work in a personal project since a fall in my bathroom in 1955…’
Abby and Luka looked at each other...
‘I’m not crazy, I swear… I have a test of sanity to show you if you want…’said the scientist. ‘I have a story to tell you about… ‘
‘ Which is?’ asked Luka.
Abby looked at him... he wasn’t believing in any of this , was he?
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Post by suzanne on Feb 13, 2009 8:44:25 GMT 10
Dani you can't leave us like that!! Wonder what his story is?? Update soon!!
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Post by daniella on Feb 22, 2009 13:01:28 GMT 10
Chapter 8: Telling the story 2
Abby looked at him... he wasn’t believing in any of this, was he?
‘Luka...’ said Abby.
Luka ignored her.
‘Well, I live in the future...’started Dr. Brown. ‘I was travelling with my wife, without leaving home, as my older son came with this...’
He showed them the newspaper.
‘A newspaper?’ asked Luka.
‘Yeah...’ said Dr. Brown approaching Luka. ‘Look at the date...’
‘May, 25th... 2020?’ read Luka.
‘Luka, you aren’t going to believe in him, are you?’ asked Abby.
Luka looked at the scientist.
‘Read the article...’ asked Dr. Brown. ‘Out loud, please...’
Luka sighed and started to read the article.
‘Yesterday, at 02:04 in the morning, 24th of May, 2020, there was a few explosions in Atticus building, a computer factory ... the bodies of a few young men, including a follower of Dr. Brown, a famous and notorious teacher…’ Luka stopped and looked at the scientist. Then, he continued: ‘... Joe Kovac, 17 years old, Eric Jo...’
Luka stopped suddenly... there was almost no one in the US with this surname… actually, there was only him...
Luka looked at Dr. Brown.
‘Who is Joe Kovac?’ he asked.
‘Joe is your son...’said Dr. Brown.
‘What?’ asked Abby and Luka, together and surprised.
‘You are getting married in three years...’ explained Dr. Brown. ‘Soon, after the time travel you start dating each other...’
Dr. Brown stopped and looked at both... they were still in shock...
‘You have four children... ’ continued the scientist. ‘Joe,the eldest... Pamela, 14..., James, 11... and Kim, 5 years old...’
Abby looked at Luka.
‘But we... tried her.
‘Now, after this week, you won’t think like this again...’ said Dr. Brown to her. ‘Besides, I have the picture of you wedding…. But it won’t appear anything, because you still aren’t married...‘
‘When are we going to get married?’ asked Luka.
‘In October 02nd, 2003...’ said Dr. Brown. ‘I know it’s crazy, but it’s the truth….’
‘Luka, are you...’ tried Abby, but one look at him and she saw that he believed it. ’This is crazy...’
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Post by suzanne on Feb 23, 2009 2:14:13 GMT 10
Great update Dani!! Really liking this fic because it's different!! Update soon!!
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Post by littlegirl on Feb 24, 2009 2:02:51 GMT 10
Wow. This is an interesting outcome. A time travel. Great idea! Update soon!!!
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Post by daniella on Mar 9, 2009 4:22:55 GMT 10
Thanks, girls... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 9: ‘This is crazy...’ Luka looked to Abby...he was divided... would he believe in the scientist or not? Sighing, he turned back to Dr. Brown. ‘If we believe on what you’re saying, what would we have to do?’ he asked. ‘We’re stuck here...’ ‘You’ll have to go to the future with me so you can prevent this from happening...’ said Dr. Brown. ‘You can’t be serious...’ said Abby. Luka turned to her. ‘Abby... ‘ he tried. ‘I know this sound as a crazy thing, ‘Mrs.’ Kovac...’ said the scientist, but saw that calling her this way was a mistake. Abby glared at him…. ‘First off, it’s Miss Lockhart...’ she said. ‘Second, we will call the if..’ Luka cut her off and turned back to the doctor in front of him... ‘We are going with you…’ he said, knowing very well this would to irritate her more. Abby couldn’t believe on what Luka did.... ‘Luka...’ ‘Abby, I guess we should listen to what he has to say to us...’ Luka said. ‘I know this is crazy, but once in your life...’ ‘I don’t care...’ she said. ‘I want to get out of here and forget this crazy story…’ Luka looked at the scientist... both knew that there was only one chance for her to accept this… The scientist grabbed his sleep inducer, walked towards Abby... after a clearing, she got back to sleep….. ‘She is going to kill me for doing this...’Luka said. ‘But I don’t want any other kid of mine dead, even if it’s not born yet...’ Dr. Brown nodded... he knew what had happened to the other man… Joe had told him all about his father.... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Post by suzanne on Mar 9, 2009 6:13:19 GMT 10
Very nice update!! Can't wait to see what happens next!! Very interesting and different!! Poor Abby having to be put asleep again!! Update soon!!
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Post by littlegirl on Mar 9, 2009 6:20:02 GMT 10
Luka knows what's good for them. Just a little bit sad that Abby had to sleep again. However, well written. Can't wait to see what happens now.
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