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Post by baboune51 on Apr 19, 2009 9:25:06 GMT 10
they met their daugthers and soon Joe ! nice udapte !
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Post by suzanne on Apr 19, 2009 20:35:47 GMT 10
Very nice update!! Can't believe they met their daughter's!! Update soon!!
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Post by shelby on Apr 20, 2009 0:55:11 GMT 10
Awww....so cute that they met their daughters!! Now they just have to meet Joe! Update again soon!
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Post by daniella on Apr 22, 2009 7:58:07 GMT 10
It will get more hot in here, but only in the next chapter... But now... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 15 From houses and robots 1 ‘And now? What we do?’ asked Abby… ‘Come…’ said Luka. They walked towards the stairs. ‘If they see us doing this, they will get suspicious…’ he said, talking under his breath. Abby nodded and followed him upstairs. The house wasn’t much different from the houses from their present…. the corridor had pictures, that changed landscapes and colors… the doors opened automatically when the got closer, so it was easy to know their room… There was a dog – robot on their son’s bedroom… when it saw them, it balanced his tail… Nemo was his name and he was inside of their son’s room… ‘This is…’ Abby tried ‘James room…’ Luka said and she nodded. They passed in front of Kim room’s too… the saw another robot, packing up everything… it turned around and when it saw them, said their names and bend it’s head to the side… it was a Wall – e robot, who picked up trash and transformed it in cubes, but now it made company for their daughter… ‘I can’t believe we are really in the future…’ said Abby, entering on their room. ‘Pretty cool, uh?’ said Luka, a little excited about being in the future… But Abby turned and with fists, approached him. ‘Pretty cool?’ she asked, anger was evident in her voice. ‘You kidnapped me…’ ‘Look…’ he said, closing the door. The light turned on automatically, without a sensor. ‘I’m sorry for that, it wasn’t my intention… you have every right to be angrier with me, but remember that we have to work together now… we have to pretend that we are married and love each other…’ Luka stopped, still looking at her… If only she knew the truth… he thought. ‘You can hate me when we are back…’ ‘I don’t hate you, Luka…’ said Abby, crossing her arms over her chest. ‘Just want to see me dead, instead…’ he said. ‘It’s ok, really…’ ‘Luka…’ said Abby. ‘You are constantly breathing down on my neck, criticizing me when I do a diagnosis and doubting me, making me feel inferior and a fool alone or in front of other people… what do you want me to do?’ Luka saw that he really do that and felt bad… but it was for opposite reasons from what she believed it was… he didn’t want to admit but he was in love with her…. and he didn’t know how to deal with it, so he treated her this way… Approaching her, he said: ‘I’m really sorry about this… it isn’t my intention to treat you like this…’ Abby looked down. ‘I won’t do that again, but you have to promise me that we’re going to do this right, ok ?’ he asked. She nodded. ‘Ok…’ she said. ‘Now, I’m taking a shower…’ She went to the bathroom of the suite. ‘Do you need any help?’ he asked, to enlighten the mood. She turned and looked at him. He was smiling… ‘No…’ she said, before closing the door. Luka’s smiled got bigger as he looked around the room… XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Post by suzanne on Apr 22, 2009 8:31:32 GMT 10
Nice update!! Poor Abby thinking Luka picked on her for no reason!! Update soon!!
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Post by baboune51 on Apr 23, 2009 6:52:00 GMT 10
He does not to know to say to her that he is in love with her ! nice udapte !
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Post by daniella on Apr 25, 2009 15:05:09 GMT 10
Thanks... Now, just a warning for those who are minors... there is a small scene of female nudity in this part... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 16: From houses and robots 2 Inside the bathroom, Abby was trying to turn on the shower… she imagined it was the same as the light, that when someone walked in, it turned on, but no… there was nothing to indicate how she could turn it on… ‘Is it too much to ask for a shower?’ she asked. When she finished the shower turned on… she got scared, but didn’t moved away from the warm water, so she was entirely wet… ‘Great…’ she said. ‘Turn off…’ The shower turned off and she looked down at herself… she couldn’t go outside like this or Luka would laugh from her face…so, she exited the part of the shower and took off her clothes… picking up a towel, she enrolled around herself… she then opened the door and entered the room… Luka was laying on the bed, with his hands behind his head and his legs crossed at his ankles… he looked from the television to her… ‘Did you already take a shower?’ he asked. ‘Depend on your definition of shower…’ she said. Luka smiled as she was going to the closed, which appears to be made from normal wood… a small mistake… after opening it, Abby couldn’t take the clothes with just one hand… This made her use both hands… ‘Luka, help me here…’ she asked. He shook his head in negative and continued smiling… it was just so much fun to see her trying so hard… At this time, the towel which was enrolled on her body, untied and fell on the ground… at the same time she said to the closet to let go of the clothes… because they were released, she lost her balance and fell to the ground… Luka sat quickly on the bed and saw all of her… he immediately felt guilt… after all, he just saw Abby naked… it appeared that the Doctor’s device just aged her face… but her body, it was normal… her breasts, the valley between her legs, her butt… she had no streaking or cellulitis… Down, boy… he thought. But he knew it would be difficult, because of his memory… Abby covered herself the best as she could… she look at Luka with a cold and death glare… he actually gulped dry… Abby didn’t say anything, as she got up holding the towel against her body and the clothes on the other hand. ‘I guess this is what happened with your shower…’ he said, quietly. Abby only looked at him as she went to the bathroom again… ‘Off the bed, now!’ she said. ‘When I come back, I don’t want to see you laying down on it…’ X ~ X ~ X Abby came from her shower fifteen minutes later… Luka got up from the bed… He really hopped it helped her to cool down… he was mistaken… Picking up a pillow after sitting on the bed, she threw it for him… ‘You’re going to sleep on the couch tonight…’ she said. ’Actually, the all week… you put us in all this mess, so…’ ‘But we have to behave as a couple, Abby…’ he said. ’We can’t get caught or…’ ‘Maybe you could have thought on this before…’ she said. ‘Couch… to behave as a couple doesn’t mean we have to sleep together, at the same bed…’ Defeated, Luka sighed and with a bit of anger, picked up his pillow and went to sleep on the couch… XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Post by suzanne on Apr 25, 2009 19:32:04 GMT 10
Ah poor Luka getting kicked out of bed onto the couch!! Abby soaking herself and the closet was funny!! Hope you update again soon!!
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Post by baboune51 on Apr 26, 2009 19:45:33 GMT 10
poor Luka , he going to have to sleep onthe couch ! this udapte is so funny
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Post by daniella on May 4, 2009 10:29:11 GMT 10
Thanks... i wasn't sure it was funny in English as it was into Portuguese... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 17: From houses and robots 3 It was almost dawn and Luka was turning one more time on the couch… it was very uncomfortable to sleep there… Getting up, he resolved to sleep on the floor… at least he would be able to stretch his long legs… Into the bed, Abby opened her eyes at his sighed and looked at him… ‘Luka, what are you doing?’ she asked. ‘Trying to sleep…’ he said, with eyes closed. ‘But on the floor?’ she asked. Luka opened one eye, than the other… he was about to say something, when there was a knock on the door… the computer identified the owner and opened the door … it was Kim… ‘Mommy, I’m thirsty…’ she said. ‘Daddy, what are you doing on the floor?’ ‘We fought, honey…’ Abby explained., after a few seconds. ‘Your robot can’t pick it up for you?’ Kim giggled. ‘Wall – e is sleeping, mommy…’she said. ‘All right…’Abby said, getting up and walking to the little girl. Picking up her hand, she turned to Luka on the floor. ‘You can go to bed now, honey… we are going to pick some water… ‘ Kim nodded. When she was getting downstairs, Luka slimed… he knew that saying this was killing her… X ~ X ~ X Ten minutes later, Abby came back alone… Luka was on the bed, as she said. ‘Luka, stay on your side…’ she said. ‘This is my side…’ ‘Sorry…’ he said, going to his side. ‘Can I have some sheets in case I’m cold…’ Abby threw some sheets to him, but didn’t say anything… just lay on her side, her back to him… ‘Thanks…’ he said turning on his side too. X ~ X ~ X In the morning, when the alarm rang, Abby woke up quickly… she didn’t see, but she hit hard on something… ‘Ooh, my head…’ she said, laying on her back and rubbing her head. Looking on her side, she saw Luka holding his mouth too… ‘Luka… well done…’ Abby said, closing her eyes. ‘But I didn’t realize I hugging you…’ he said, with his hand over his mouth. Abby opened her eyes and saw that he was really hurt… taking off his hand from his mouth, she could see the small cut on the side… ‘I really hurt you, didn’t I?’ she affirmed. ‘Nothing that a kiss doesn’t heal…’ he said, just to test her. ‘Bite me, Luka…’ she said, getting up from the bed… Luka just stayed on the bed, smiling… xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Dani
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Post by suzanne on May 4, 2009 10:45:25 GMT 10
I'm loving this fic!! Luka is so funny talking/flirting with Abby even though she's not re-acting to it!! They need to get closer, and fast!! Update soon!!
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Post by baboune51 on May 5, 2009 7:35:04 GMT 10
They are so funny ! great udapte !
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Post by daniella on May 8, 2009 12:12:22 GMT 10
Yes, they are... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 18: Meeting the kids... When they finally went downstairs, all of their kids were in the kitchen, having breakfast… it was now 07:58 AM… they could go downstairs earlier, but they imagined the looks of their kids if they were younger… so, they had to retouch themselves… and plane how to convince Joe to abandon the project he was working on… ‘Good morning, sleepyheads…’ Joe said, laughing. Abby saw he looked very much like Luka, but she could see a small part of her on him too. ‘Good morning…’ said Luka. ‘Keep this up and you’re grounded…’ ‘Sorry…’ said Joe, still smiling. Abby looked at father and son, still mesmerized. ‘Mommy, are you ok?’ asked Kim. ‘Yes, honey…’said Abby, walking towards her and kissing the top of her head. ‘Good morning…’ said a metallic voice. Abby saw that Kim’s robot was talking to her. ‘Good morning, Wall – e…’ she said. ‘Mom, dad…’ called James. ‘Can I go on that trip to the lake?’ ‘What trip?’ Luka asked. ‘We planned to go to the lake this weekend…’ said James. ‘Sure…’ he said quickly. James talked to the other Luka, not him… ‘Will someone be there? I mean, adults… James rolled his eyes. ‘Of course, dad…’ he said. ‘Tim’s parents will be there…’ ‘And who will go with you on this trip?’ asked Abby, sitting on an empty seat. Kim took the opportunity and sat on her lap. Abby hold her by the waist. ‘Tim, John, Richard and I…’ said James. ‘I don’t see why do you like this…’ said Pamela, taking a fruit of the dispenser which was above the table. James looked at her and showed his tongue. ‘James…’ said Luka. ‘Sorry, dad…’ he said. ‘I really want to go…’ ‘And who will be looking Kim?’ asked Abby. ‘Don’t look at me…’ said Joe. ‘I have an appointment on Saturday…’ ‘And I’m going to sleep at Sabrina’s…’ said Pamela. ‘Ok, you can go…’ said Luka, picking the fruit that Kim’s robot was giving to him. ‘We figure it out… thanks, Wall – e…’ The small robot made a sound of happiness… XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Post by suzanne on May 8, 2009 19:07:47 GMT 10
Nice update!! Loving the way Luka is so at ease with the whole situation!! Update again soon!!
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Post by baboune51 on May 11, 2009 7:13:14 GMT 10
They have to meet everything them chlidrens ! nice udapte !
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