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Post by niknik on May 14, 2009 1:32:33 GMT 10
the idea of writing a present/future is so great! i love luka's effort to flirt with abby!! update soon !!
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Post by daniella on May 15, 2009 14:21:10 GMT 10
Thanks...
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Chapter 19: Adventures in Tomorrowland 1...
After, when they were alone in the kitchen, Luka decided to follow Joe while Abby would stay at home, after taking Kim to the kindergarten, so she could see the room of their oldest son.
So, when Joe exited, Luka started to follow Joe…
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At home, Abby was ready to take Kim to the kindergarden… so, when she came back, she would have the whole house to her and she could start looking…
‘Are you ready, Kim?’ Abby asked, walking into her daughter’s room.
She smiled when she saw Wall – e helping Kim… really, this robot was cute…
‘I love you Wall – e…’ said Kim, hugging him. He put his head on her chest and close his robotic eyes.
Then, she turned o her mom after a few seconds.
‘Got everything?’ asked Abby.
‘Yes, mommy…’ Kim said.
‘Great, let’s go…’ said Abby, picking up her hand.
Kim waved to Wall – e, who followed then to the top of the stairs where he waved at them.
They walked into the garage to the car… when Abby saw there was no lock to put the key… she was uncertain and didn’t know how to do it, so Kim opened for her…
‘Forgot how to do it, mommy?’ Kim asked.
Abby thought quickly about the answer… after all she was still getting used to all of this… and this made her realize she didn’t know anything, even where Kim school was…
‘Yeah… I’m having amnesia today, honey…’ she lied. ‘What do you think of showing how can we go to your school?’
‘Ok, mommy…’ Kim said, entering the car.
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Getting home was an adventure to Abby… she took more than two hours to figure out how to arrived, in a fifteen minutes path and more half an hour, just to make the GPS system work…
Finally, after what appeared to be an eternity, she parked the car on the driveway…
Entering home, she sat on the couch, sighing tiredly… she was missing her life on the present… past… whatever it was… she was missing her apartment, her couch, her bed… even her pathetic little life… not that she would admit this to anyone…
Remembering the sole point of this trip to the future, she got up and walked upstairs, to Joe’s room, so she could look for some clues on what project he was working…
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Luka sighed… he followed Joe to the school… since the school started, he had waited, hidding… there was no sign of his son walking out of the building…
Looking at his watch, he sighed again… it was after ten thirty…
He decided that was useless to be hiding until three o’clock… besides, he was almost sure that Joe saw him and had discovered that he was following him…
Getting up, he decided to return home… maybe Abby was luckier…
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Joe looked outside, from the class window… finally his dad went away… now he could go to where he was meeting everybody from the group… he had only to wait the bell for the next class…
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Post by suzanne on May 15, 2009 18:44:10 GMT 10
Nice update Dani!! Kim is cute showing her mommy how to do stuff and get to her kindergarden!! Wonder where Joe is going?? Update soon!!
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Post by baboune51 on May 16, 2009 7:59:09 GMT 10
I hope , they're going to succeed has to save Joe ! nice udapte !
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Post by daniella on May 19, 2009 15:26:37 GMT 10
Chapter 20: Adventure in Tomorrowland 2
When Luka arrived home, he didn’t find anyone, so he thought that Abby was out. Getting upstairs, he went to Joe’s room.
The family’s robot dog came running, but Luka send him away…
Opening the door, he saw Abby trying to wiggle on their son’s computer… he smiled…
‘I thought you weren’t home…’ he said.
Abby got scared and jumped on the chair…
‘ Ah, Luka…’ she said, looking at him. ‘You almost gave me a heart attack…’
Luka smiled.
‘I’m sorry…’ he said, entering the room. ‘Found anything?’
‘No…’ she said. ‘I couldn’t even enter his computer…’
‘We can try giving it a boot…’ He said.
‘Good idea…’ she said. ‘Think he has something in here?’
‘Maybe…’ he said. Here, let me try…’
Luka saw it wasn’t a conventional computer, like they were used to… this one didn’t have a keyboard or a mouse… so, to digit was impossible, so he tried to touch the screen… it turned on…
Abby got up to gave Luka space. When she sat on Joe’s bed, she almost fell back. It was too smooth and floppy… it looked like a water mattress, but it wasn’t… it was a mattress that formed itself according to the person… she could feel it changes…
Luka turned to her.
‘Having fun on the bed?’ he asked.
Abby glared at him. Luka turned back to the computer, hiding his malicious smile.
After a few minutes, she asked.
‘Did you make it?’
‘No… I’m going to see Dr. Brown…’ he said. ‘He should know how to make these computers work…’
Luka got up.
‘And now?’ she asked.
‘Go…’ he was saying, but tripped on the chairs on the chairs feet and fell directly over Abby… she fell down on the mattress, taking him with her…
‘Luka…’she said, pushing him off her.
Luka rolled to his side.
‘I’m sorry…’ he said. ‘ I tripped on the chair…’
All this moving around woke up Wall – e and Hop – 3, James' robot…
Abby looked at Luka, as he was trying to get up.
‘Be more careful next time…’ she said.
‘I said I was sorry…’ he said, now angry.
‘Sorry, always sorry…’ she said. ‘When it’s not this, you’re always picking on me or fighting with me…’
‘How?’ he asked, crossing his arms over his chest. ‘It’s you who always see me as an enemy…’
‘Me?’ she asked, outraged. ‘You know what? I’m done this attitude of yours…’
‘What attitude?’ Luka asked.
Abby didn’t say anything and exited the room quickly, passing by the two robots who shrunk, frightened.
‘Women…’ Luka said, putting his hands up, exasperated.
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Post by suzanne on May 19, 2009 16:44:58 GMT 10
Nice update!! Luka and Abby need to have a nice long chat and sort out their underlying feelings for each other!! All the fighting their doing should mean some nice, hot make up sessions!! That is when they finally admit to their feelings for each other!! Looking forward to your next update!! Update soon!!
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Post by baboune51 on May 22, 2009 8:44:26 GMT 10
they have to speak and Luka has to hadmit her , that he's in love with her ! nice udapte
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Post by justcala on May 22, 2009 21:26:07 GMT 10
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Post by daniella on May 27, 2009 1:26:46 GMT 10
Thanks... glad you like it... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 21: Adventures in tomorrowland 3 02:39 PM Luka had called o Dr. brown and they were now stirring on Joe’s computer. In the end, they had found an archive where Luka discovered that Joe decided to mount bombs, but where and when, he didn’t know… ‘I don’t think it’s prudent to tell Abby right now…’ said the doctor. ‘But she can help me with Joe…’ said Luka. ‘Yes, she can… but he tends to listen more you, Luka…’ said the scientist. ‘He just listen to her, sometimes…’ Luka nodded. ‘I’ll talk to him later…’ he said. ‘Now, I have to talk to Abby…’ ‘To apologize?’ asked the doctor ‘How do you know?’ Luka asked, looking at him. ‘I am married too…’ said Dr. brown, smiling. ‘But we’re not married…’ Luka observed. ‘Yet…’ said the scientist. X ~ X ~ X Abby was in the backyard of the house… it was a big garden, with a pool by wi – fi remote and the barbecue was floating. Wall –e, more calm and less frightened was “ playing” with Hop – 3, more calm too… Abby was observing them from her spot on a floating chair… Luka sighed when he saw her… ‘Abby…’ he called. Abby ignored him. She knew if she looked at him, the truth would be out… she really liked him and felt attracted to him, but after what happened… Luka took her sign as anger towards him… descending a few steps, slowly, he approached her… ‘Are you mad at me?’ he asked, slowly. ‘What do you think?’ she asked, looking finally at him. ‘Look, it was an accident…’ he said. ‘I didn’t want it to happen…’ What did he mean? He didn’t want this to happen this way or never, at all? Abby looked to the ground again. ‘Thanks, Luka…’ she said. ‘This was just what I needed…’ ‘No… I mean, I didn’t want this to happen this way…’ he kicked himself, mentally. Abby looked at him again. ‘So, this is an apology?’ she asked. ‘I guess so…’ he said. Abby sighed… this trip into time really changed him… he didn’t look like as the same man who fought with her and period. This Luka was different… She looked at her hands… ‘What if it happens again?’ she asked. ‘Then we deal with it…’ he said. ‘Do you want it to happen again?’ ‘Well, if it happens, I’m not going to stop this time…’ she said. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Post by baboune51 on May 27, 2009 6:49:07 GMT 10
oh my good , I can't wait to see what happens next ! realy nice udapte !
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Post by suzanne on May 27, 2009 7:52:53 GMT 10
Can't wait to see what happens next!! Glad there finally talking, well a bit anyway!! You have to get them closer!! Update soon!!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on May 27, 2009 18:06:32 GMT 10
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Post by niknik on May 28, 2009 1:42:21 GMT 10
can't wait to see what will happen when that happens again
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Post by daniella on Jun 2, 2009 11:58:19 GMT 10
Thanks... glad you're liking it... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 21: Continuing the conversation... ‘Well, if it happens, I’m not going to stop this time…’ she said. Luka was surprised. ‘I’m sorry… what?’ he asked. Abby knew right away that her confession made things more complicated… finally, looking at him, she said: ‘The truth, Luka is I like you… very much…’ Luka lifted her eyebrows. Abby likes me? ‘What medicine did you take?’ he asked. Abby looked at him strangely… ‘What?’ she asked, don’t understanding… ‘For you to say that, you must be taking anything…’ said Luka, smirking. Abby was about to say something, but decided against it… on contrary, she faced away from him and closing her eyes, sighed… ‘Luka, I mean it…’ she said. Luka looked down for a few seconds. ‘Wow…’ he said. Abby turned to look at him. ‘Since when?’ he asked. ‘Since…’ she started to say. ‘Always, I guess…’ ‘Always?’ he asked and she nodded. ‘Since you entered on County…’ she said, looking down. ‘In the beginning it was only attraction.. .but it turned in something stronger… but you seemed to always fight with me or let me angrier…’ Luka felt guilt when he heard that… but she let him angrier on purpose too… ‘But… you always let me angrier too…’ he admitted. ‘It is…’ she started to say. ‘Frustration, a little anger, but nothing of this is true because I fell bed afterwards, when I arrive at home… I know you going to treat me badly later on and that’s why I do this with you… to protect myself…’ Luka kicked himself mentally to not understand this psique of hers… ‘It’s all right if you don’t feel the same, Luka…’ she said. ‘ I’ll understand why you… can’t…’ She stopped when she saw his raised hand… ‘Abby…’ he said. ‘Don’t you see I’m crazy about you too?’ XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Post by Martine on Jun 2, 2009 19:41:25 GMT 10
They finally admit they are crazy about each other !!!
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