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Post by daniella on Mar 15, 2009 23:11:11 GMT 10
Hey girls.... forgive me if this part has a few mistakes... I had some trouble to translate it...
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Chapter 10: Time Travel 1
After the scientist released them, Luka looked around....
‘Quickly, take her and come with me...’ said the scientist, holding Abby up after releasing her. ‘We don’t have much time...’
Luka nodded and walked towards them...Dr. Brown released Abby and she, whom was still seated, fell forward, but Luka was quicker and hold her up.
‘And now?’ he asked Dr. Brown.
The scientist turned to them. Einstein, the dog was with him.
‘Don’t keep standing over there… come quickly...’ said the scientist, making a sign for Luka to walk faster.
‘But... ‘tried Luka.
‘Take her on your arms…’ said the doctor, walking back again.
Luka sighed and turned to Abby. Getting her up in her arms he thought: She’s going to kill me…
He followed the scientist and the dog to… a car… as Dr. Brown opened the DeLorean door, Luka looked at him.
‘There’s just a one seat…’ he said.
‘You can share it...’ said the scientist walking to the other side.
Luka looked at him, dumbfolded...
‘Get in...’ said Dr. Brown, entering the car.
Luka sighed again... she's really going to kill me...
He got down and put Abby there careful in the car… after, he entered behind her… it was tight…
‘Put her in your lap...’ said the scientist.
Luka sighed for the third time... she’s really, really going to kill me...
He put Abby on his lap… she turned her head to him, against his shoulder... her breathing on his neck was making things difficult to him…
Luka tried to think in other things, instead...
‘And, what about him?’ he asked, looking at the dog, sitting near the car.
‘Don’t worry about Einstein...’ said Dr. Brown. ‘For him, this will look like it never happened…
Luka saw him push some buttons on the car’s panel and turning on the flux capacitor…
‘This is what make the time travel possible…’ explained Dr. Brown, then turning to the dog. ‘Einstein, the garage...’
The dog walked towards the garage door and pushed on the control, a red bright Button with his paw… soon the garage was opening…
Dr. Brown put a special glasses and turned the car on...
‘How this thing work?’ asked Luka…
‘When we are almost a 88 miles per hour, the flux capacitor will send us to the date that is on this panel…'
‘And the fuel?’
‘Fuel?’ said the scientist. ’We won’t need it… just garbage….’
They drive to the street.
‘This street isn’t big enough…’ observed Luka.
‘To where we are going, we won’t need streets…’said the scientist. ‘Hold on... ’
He pushed another button and the car trembled… Luka hold Abby against himself…
Soon the car was in the air and had the four tires laid… Dr. Brown looked at Luka and start on the gas…
On the air, the car built the right speed and in a smoke explosion, disappeared…
Einstein whined a little and returned to the house…
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Dani
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Post by suzanne on Mar 15, 2009 23:29:05 GMT 10
Great update!!  Luka is right Abby is gonna kill him!!  Can't wait to see what happens next, update soon!!  |
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Post by daniella on Mar 21, 2009 12:32:23 GMT 10
Chapter 11:Time Travel 2
Future Time:
The car appeared from nothing into the sky... Luka opened his eyes and lokked around, then at Dr. Brown.
‘Are we in the future?’ he asked..
The scientist nodded.
Luka looked outside... really, when they took off, it was day...now, it was night…
He would have said something, but Abby in his lap started to wake up...
‘She wasn’t supposed to wake up now…’ he commented.
‘I guess I used all the inducer power on the first time, so the it didn’t have this time…’ said Dr. Brown. ‘After all, you’re big…’
He looked at Luka quickly...
Abby, at his side, opened her eyes and tired to focus...she close they again, until she noted they were moving...opening they again, she put a hand above her eyes and looked at her side… she saw Dr. Brown, driving a car...
‘What...? she began to ask.
Abby turned to him... he was much more closer from what she imagined….
‘Luka?’ she said. ‘Where are we?’
‘Into the future...’ said Dr. Brown.
Abby turned her head again to the scientist...she tried to move too, but saw she was holded by the seatbelt.
‘Don’t... do that…’said Luka in her ear, trying to hold his impulses...the fact she was sitting on his lap, was driving him crazy… he was a man and if she keep moving…. ‘I mean, if you don’t want an accident that you’re not going to like... you’re driving me crazy…’
Abby noted she was on his lap... she turned red, but didn’t show it…
‘What did he mean, into the future?’ asked Abby.
Luka looked at her... now, she is going to kill me...
‘Look...’ said Dr. Brown.
They looked at the window in front of them... soon, the road appeared in front, but couldn’t believed ... there was no track... the lighting poles were floating, like flower pots... and the cars were flying…
--Into the future...’ said Dr. Brown. ‘More precisely, in the rush hour…’
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Dani
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Post by suzanne on Mar 21, 2009 12:38:25 GMT 10
Great update!! Poor Luka and his little problem when Abby keeps moving, haha!! Update soon!! |
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Post by daniella on Mar 21, 2009 13:26:05 GMT 10
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Post by shelby on Mar 21, 2009 13:35:58 GMT 10
Aw, poor Luka  Abby must feel weird sitting on Luka's lap like that.  Great update!! |
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Post by daniella on Mar 30, 2009 21:47:32 GMT 10
Hello, girls... Sorry for the delay... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 12: Welcome to Chicago 1 When the scientist entered in the 2020 Chicago, Abby and Luka were with their mouths opened. They looked at him. ‘Look, I know that we need to talk…’ said Dr. Brown. ‘But I really need your help…’ ‘And you decide to kidnap me?’ asked Abby, screaming. ‘It was me who decided…’said Luka, knowing very well that he was in a lot of trouble. Abby turned to him. ‘You?’ asked Abby, surprised. Luka nodded. ‘Stop this car, I want to get out…’ she said to Dr. Brown. ‘This is not a good neighborhood…’ said Dr. Brown. ‘But in two minutes, I’ll stop the machine…’ ‘How do you know this isn’t a good neighborhood?’ asked Abby. ‘I have been here before…’ said the scientist. X ~ X ~ X The scientist was truthful to his word and two minutes later, he pushed a button and the DeLorean went back to normal, then he stopped the car. Luka opened the car door and Abby pulled the seatbelt… she wanted to get out quickly, so she passed over Luka… ‘Careful…’ said Luka. Abby exited the car and Luka sighed, then followed her outside… ‘Luka… I can’t believe this…’ she said, walking a little on the sideway. ‘You couldn’t decide for me… you didn’t have this right…’ ‘Abby, I know that you’re…’ Luka started to say, but when he saw her look he knew it was useless. ‘Look, I know you don’t understand, but I couldn’t let this happen again…’ ‘Happen again what?’ Abby asked. ’Look, I know what you have been trough…you told me already… but you can’t let this consume you…’ Luka lowered his head. ‘You don’t understand…’ he said. ‘You don’t know the pain…’ But she cut him off. ‘Yes, Luka, I know…’ she said. ‘You aren’t the only one who has lost someone closer to you…’ XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani |
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Post by suzanne on Apr 1, 2009 6:59:00 GMT 10
Great update!! Can't wait to see what happens!! Update soon!!  |
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Post by baboune51 on Apr 1, 2009 21:39:46 GMT 10
great udapte this story is so funny |
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Post by shelby on Apr 14, 2009 10:19:10 GMT 10
I love this story! Abby's so funny! Update soon! I can't wait to see what happens! |
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Post by daniella on Apr 14, 2009 11:56:14 GMT 10
Hey, firls... sorry for the dealy... I'm finifhing A heart's Desire in portuguese... there are very BIG surprises yet to come...
Now...
PS: I changed Abby past a little...
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Chapter 13: Welcome to Chicago 2
‘Yes, Luka, I know…’ she said. ‘You aren’t the only one who has lost someone…’
Luka was curious about it and asked, with his arms crossed on his chest.
‘Excuse – me?’
Abby sighed. She knew she would have to tell now:
'When I was married with Richard, I had a miscarriage… I was about four months…’ she explained.
‘So, you know how it is...’ said Luka. ‘I don’t want to let our son die…’
‘You’re not letting if he still didn’t even born…’ said Abby. ‘ And you still believe in all of this?’
At this time, passed beside them a dog walking with a floating electronic collar… there was no one behind the dog, just the collar…
‘You better believe…’ said Luka, still looking at the dog.
Dr. Brown intervened on the conversation at this moment…
‘Dra. Lockhart, I know you’re frustrated, but this is real…’said the scientist. ‘After we do what we’re supposed to, we go back and this will be like it never happened…’
‘If this didn’t happened yet, why we’re here?’ she asked.
‘I already tried everything else, but nothing changes…’ said Dr. Brown.
‘And why do you think it will change with us here?’ she asked again.
‘Because of this…’ it was a fax paper, saying to look for his parents and… signed by Joe…
Abby picked the paper and looked it over. The Luka pulled it from her hands and she glared at him. Then she turned back to the scientist.
‘And how do you know this?’ she asked again, skeptic.
‘I travelled in time once, you know…’ said Dr. Brown. ‘Actually, more than a few times…’
‘Since we are here, what we do now?’ asked Luka, interrupting them.
Dr. Brown lifted a finger.
‘First, I’m going to use a small device to get you older…’ he explained, running to the car and picking a small device. ‘Then,
I’m going to take care of the others yourselves and make them disappear for a week… you mustn’t meet you... them... or this can be catastrophic…’
Abby was truly unhappy with all of this… she didn’t want to get old…
‘Wait…’she said, lifting her hands. ‘Are you going to get us older?’
‘Only for a short time…’ Dr. Brown said, returning for their side. ‘The effect remains for a day… but…’
‘But?’ asked Luka.
‘Since, as I said, you are going to stay here for a week…’ said Dr. Brown. ‘You have to do it every day, in the morning…’
‘WHAT?’ asked Abby. This was too much for her…
‘Ready?’ Dr. Brown asked, ignoring her outburst.
Luka nodded as Abby denied at the same time.
‘This is crazy…’ said Abby. ‘It must be a dream…’
The scientist gave her a pinch on the arm.
‘Ohh…’she said, rubbing her arm. ‘Why did you do that for?’
‘If it was a dream, this wouldn’t hurt, right?’ asked the scientist. ‘Now, can we?’
Abby was about to protest, but Dr. Brown put the device in front of her and sprinkled a spray on her face… she coughed a little as the small droplets gave her allergy… then it was Luka’s time…
Seconds later, Abby looked at him.
‘Not bad…’ she said.
‘You aren’t that bad either…’ he said.
‘What?’ asked Abby, outraged. ‘ You…’
‘No - no – no…’ he said. ‘You don’t want to kill your children’s father, do you?’
Abby tightened her eyes…
‘You’re going to pay me, Luka Kovac…’ she said.
The opposites atract themselves…the scientist thought.
‘Come on…’ said Dr. Brown, interrupting them again. ‘We don’t have time to loose…’
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Post by shelby on Apr 14, 2009 12:12:06 GMT 10
Great update! Abby wanting to kill Luka, very funny! Update again soon! |
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Post by suzanne on Apr 14, 2009 18:59:23 GMT 10
Great update!!  Looking forward to what happens next!! Update soon!! |
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Post by baboune51 on Apr 14, 2009 19:44:47 GMT 10
they're going to save Joe nice udapte ! |
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Post by daniella on Apr 19, 2009 6:17:56 GMT 10
And it will be more crazy... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 13: The house 1 Dr. Brown stopped the DeLorean in front of a big house, identifying it as Luka and Abby’s. ‘Both the ‘Is’ of you aren’t home from work yet…’ said the scientist. ’I’m going to intercept them… the children are at home, so treat yourselves with respect…’ Abby bite her tongue and didn’t say anything. ‘Ok…’ said Luka. ‘What are we supposed to do?’ ‘You have a week to convince Joe to step out of the project he’s working…’ said Dr. Brown. ‘But don’t try anything different from that, he doesn’t know you know… the you of the future actually don’t know, so act discretely…’ Luka nodded. He opened the door, but Abby exited the time machine before he could move, being carefulness and hurting him a little… he didn’t say anything tough and exited the car… ‘Don’t go by the front door…’ said the doctor, trying to warning them, but it was late... Abby went directly to the front door… The scientist hung his head down… X ~ X ~ X When she stepped on the front way, before the car went away, a computer made a total sweep of Abby’s body... then opened the door… it did the same with Luka, analyzing the features of his body… ‘Welcome home, Mr. Kovac…’ said the robotic voice. Luka looked strangely, but entered the house… he met with Abby at the hall… ‘It’s look…’ he started to say. Abby could only nod. Soon, a small voice startled them. It was a little girl, coming running from the kitchen. ‘Mommy… Daddy…’ she said. It was a perfect combination of… the two of them… Abby didn’t remember her name, but Luka picked her up when she approached them… ‘How are you, my princess Kim?’ he asked, giving her face small kisses. Luka had photographic memory, so it was easy for him to remember things… it was so good to hug someone who called
him daddy again… She laughed and looked over at Abby… Luka looked at her too… Abby looked at them… seeing his expression, she approached and smiled. ‘Hi, sweet…’ she said kissing her forehead. Kim smiled and Luka then put her on the floor. Another voice appeared from the kitchen. ‘Hey, mom… dad…’ said the teenager. ‘How was work today?’ When they turned to her, they saw a robot floating behind her… ‘Tiresome…’ said Luka, amazed by what he was seeing… ‘Want something to eat?’ she asked. ‘I already gave Kim her dinner…’ ‘Not now, honey…’ said Abby. ’We are going to take a bath first…’ ‘Ok…’ said the girl. ‘Come on, Kim… let they rest…’ Kim nodded and gave her hand to her sister. ‘Want to eat anything else?’ asked the teenager. ‘Ice cream…’ said Kim, when they entered into the kitchen. The robot followed them. Abby looked at Luka. ‘What the h#lll, happened?’ she asked. ‘I think we just met our daughters… ‘ he said. ‘And now? What we do?’ asked Abby… XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani |
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